Thursday, October 24, 2019

CE #2.2

Short Response: 
1.He was deserted by even his staunchest allies.
2.The Liberal Party.
3. "The citizens of Austin expect transparency and a voice in key policy decisions," Blyth said. "We feel that the Mayor and City Council aren't listening to us or representing us well."
4. Provide help to counselors in identifying their student's career goals and how to help the achieve their goals.
5. It was a 33 yard field goal.

Long Response:
1. Right now, a Democratic-led impeachment inquiry for Trump is in order. Trump, who doesn't not believe that this is fair, compares the inquiry to lynching. Lynching occurred back then when angry mobs killed thousands of black people. Trump's comments sparked an out-roar from many people. It most definitely disturbed people who had family members that were lynched. This was not the only time that Trump has used unleashing racially inflammatory language. However, Lindsey Graham, who is close to Trump, said, "This is a lynching in every case."
2.Lynch is when a mob kills someone, sometimes by hanging, for an offense even with pr without a legal trial.
3.Lynching was very common in the South after the American Civil War. African Americans were the most common targets, but some whites were lynched also.  Hangings were the most common use of killing when lynchings took place.
4.I think that Trump chose to use the word lynching when describing what he is currently facing with impeachment because in his opinion, he felt that a large group of people were accusing him of something without proof of it.
5. I do not think that the word lynching is appropriate in this circumstance. I think this because lynching was so horrible and awful back then, and I think that murder is a lot worse than an investigation.
5b. I think that in response, the president needs to give an apology for his use of words. That is because his words really hurt a lot of people, especially the ones who has family members or people they knew lynched.

Tuesday, October 22, 2019

SNO Online Papers

The 2018 NFL Season (The Trailblazer)
1.William Thomas wrote the story.
2.The story is about who he thinks will do good in the 2018 NFL season.
3.William's direct opinion is that some teams who have had failed seasons in the past will bounce back and be good. The reader can conclude this when he says, "Teams we haven't seen be good for a long time will bounce back and become good once again."
4.William did not address what the other side might think about their topic.
5.William was wishy-washy every once in a while. That is because a couple of times he said if this team beats this team then....
6.There are no quotes in the story.
7.William wrote in first person point of view.

Hays Alarming Lack of Soap (The Nation Wired)
1.Carlos Sanchez wrote the story.
2.Their story is about how the bathrooms at Hay's High School lacks soap.
3.Carlos' opinion is that schools should have soap. The reader can conclude this when he says, "I feel like school's should have soap on their top priority list, right up there with the good internet and good air conditioning."
4. Carlos did address that the other side might think that soap is not that big of an idea to have in a school.
5.Carlo was not wishy-washy with his opinion. That is because he was very straight-ford with what he believed in and used facts to back it up.
6.Yes, there are quotes in the story. They are quotes from some students, the principal, and from Texas Health and Safety Codes.
7.Carlos wrote in first person point of view.

How Important Are Our Standardized Tests? (The Jagwire)
1.Kevin Booza wrote the story.
2.Their story is about whether standardized testing is actually beneficial to students and the school.
3.Kevin's opinion is that standardized testing, for the most part, is useless. The reader can conclude this when he says, "Each year is the same when regards to testing. Half of the school day is dedicated to testing that helps only a few students, while the rest waste the tine that is given to practice something they don't need.
4. Kevin did address what the other side would think about the story, He put in a quote that proved that some students find testing beneficial.
5.Kevin was a little wishy-washy with his opinion. That is because his overall opinion is that the standardized testing is useless, but he does say it does help some students.
6.There are 5 quotes in the story. They are about student's opinions on standardized testing.
7.Kevin wrote in the first person point of view.




Personal Essays

1. Writing about the first day of school was an idea that the author gave in the Wide Range of Topics Section that I can use as I start to decide a topic.
2.Details draw the reader and and generalizations keep them put was an idea that the author gave in the Opinions Pieces Section that I should remember as I write my piece.
3. Three suggestions from the Personal Essays and Craft Section that I will use as I write is to use a good hook that will attract the readers attention, make connections, and make sure to double check my facts.


Thursday, October 10, 2019

CE #2.1

1. Dental Aligners
2.Fanny packs are back-but better in the front, some deals are just too good to be true, know your surroundings, don't panic if you lose your friends- there's a tent for that, its OK to drink, but stick to water, and keep your eyes peeled for danger,
3.More than 110 clients.
4. 115 times (if you count the inaugural meeting).
5. The Alamo Drafthouse of Torment. That is because I like to watch scary movies with a group of people. I would also like to go to the Yappy Hour at the Long Center. That is because I have 3 dogs. and I just love dogs in general.

Long Response: 
1. New proposed land development laws will make affordable housing in Austin multiply. If the laws get approved, then income-restricted  affordable homes in Austin, could multiply by six times. The laws would create a shift from single-family housing in Austin, to multiple unit homes. Trying to make more housing in Austin available and affordable was why the laws were brought forward. One side think that these laws are not good because it will drive out home owners. However, another side think thats these laws will allow citizens with lower incomes to live in Austin.
 
2.More affordable housing could help Austin, because right now Austin is growing like crazy and becoming more expensive, pushing people out of their homes, which means the culture of Austin is changing. With affordable housing, the people in Austin can keep living here, and the city will be prepared for a more rapid growth in population.

3. One problem with the current code is that it limits the amount of affordable pricing that Austin can have because of state laws. Another problem is that it limits the total housing unit capacity from increasing.

4. I think that Austin has a huge affordable housing issue. That is because property taxes are flying through the roofs, as Austin becomes more industrialized and populated.

5. A housing issue has impacted me. That is because, when my family is looking to buy a new home, the housing issue can become a problem when we look at whether this home will be profitable in the future.

6.One suggestion that I think would help the process or bringing more affordable housing to Austin's core is to build up. From a TED Talk from my geography class, I have learned that for cities, it is better to build up, than build out. That is so that there would be more housing in less space. That would then overall reduce the pricing of housing because there is more of it.


Ethics in the Media

A Suspect "Confession"
Summary: In mid-August, John Karr was arrested at the request of U.S officials.  The arrest was made after a journalism professor, Michael Tracey, told authorities information that he got from e-mails that John Karr had sent him because he was interested in Tracey's argument that John and Patsy Ramsey were not fairly charged with the crime of their daughter's death. After DNA testing, John Karr was cleared, but not freed because of other charges. Michael Tracy then received heat for not being very ethical.

Response: I think that you do break a confidence with a source if you think it can solve a murder or protect children half a world away. That is because, I think that you are being ethical if you are trying to protect people even if that means you have to break confidence with a source.

The Media's Foul Ball
Summary: In 2003, the Chicago Cube were 5 outs away from winning a trip to the World Series. The Cubs had not been to the World Series since 1945. However, on a foul ball, a fan tried to catch the ball instead of allowing the player to get the Cubs one out closer to the World Series. When the Florida Marlins made a comeback and knocked the Cubs out of the playoffs, a lot of people were blaming the fan in the stands for the loss. The fans identity was unknown until the Chicago Sun-Times released his name and where he worked and lived. The Chicago Sun-Times was also put under a lot of heat because many people believed that it was un-ethical for them to release the fan's name and where he lived/worked.

Response: I think that the fan, under all costs, should not be identified by the media. I think that because there are a lot of people who probably hate his guts. Not only that, but there were probably huge bets placed on the baseball game. That means that bettors who lost might want revenge on the fan. Also, the fan's identity was something that everybody did not need to know.

Publishing Drunk Drivers' Photos
Summary: Don White, an editor/publisher for a newspaper in Anderson County, Kentucky created a new policy for the newspaper that was very controversial. Starting in January 1988, any drivers convicted of drinking while driving would get there picture published in the newspaper. Don White believed that this policy would help to limit the amount of drunk drivers on the road, because the drivers would not want to get embarrassed by their picture in the newspaper for drinking while driving. However, many outsiders believed that this policy was unethical and would embarrass people more than get them to stop. One time, police reported that a teenager who got arrested for DUI tried to commit suicide after he learned that his picture would be published in the newspaper.

Response: I do not think that this is an appropriate policy for a newspaper. That is because I think that it is too extreme to publish a photo of a person arrested in the newspaper. The people who were published in the newspapers were probably really effected by it, and I think that the policy embarrassed people more than limit the amount of drunk people driving.


Friday, October 4, 2019

Opinions Writing Preview Activity

The ascending price of living in Austin:
1.Dylan Ebs wrote the story.
2.The story is about how the city of Austin is changing and becoming more modern as property taxes rise and land becomes more expensive.
3.Dylan thinks that this change is bad for Austin. In the last paragraph he says, “If the things that makes Austin unique leave, an essential component of the city will be left in the dark.”
4.He addressed that Austin is becoming more tech and corporate America. That could be a way that he addressed what the other side might think about the topic.
5.Dylan was not wishy-washy with his opinion. That is because he never once said that this change might be good. He only talked about the negative effects.
6.There are no quotes in the story.
7.They wrote in the first person point of view.
Load up, lock up, and own up to state gun control laws.
1. Lauren Joy wrote this story.
2.The story is about gun control, and whether or not there should be stricter laws.
3.Their opinion on the topic is neutral. That is because she says, “Because someone who stands in the middle ground, not fully being pro or anti gun, I feel that some people would never give up their right to own a gun.”
4.Because her opinion is neutral, she addressed both sides of the argument.
5. She was wishy-washy with her opinion. That is because her opinion is neutral, so her opinion kind of has to be wishy-washy.
6.There are no quotes in the story.
7.She wrote in the first person point of view.
Construction’s impact on the environment
1.  Editors wrote this story.
2.This story is about how construction affects the ecosystem around it and how we can help benefit our ecosystem.
3. The writer had a neutral opinion on the topic. Proof is when it says, “Although there are faults in the construction process to improve out campus, there are some positive outcomes that have stemmed from it.” 
4. Because the writer had a neutral opinion, both sides of the topic were presented.
5. The writer was a little wishy-washy with their opinion. That is because they stated both advantages and disadvantages of construction on its surrounding ecosystem.
6. There are two indirect quotes.
7. The writer wrote in the first person point of view.
VSCO girls and the effects of stereotypes on teenagers:
1.Maya Amador wrote this story.
2.This story is mainly about VSCO girls, and other stereotypes, and how bullying affects people classified as one.
3.Maya’s opinion on the topic is that bullying people, like VSCO girls, can cause severe problems but that the self discovery is super important. Proof is when it says, “One of the most important parts of growing up is about self discovery.”
4. Maya did adrees what the other side of the topic might think. She does then when she talks about how other people see VSCO girls, E-boys, or E-girls.
5. Maya was not wishy-washy with her opinion. That is because she kept on saying that self discovery is key and how trends can start new sensations, like the Beatles.
6.There are no quotes in the story.
7.Maya wrote in the first person point of view.

Final Questions

A. I think that the major differences between a hard news story and an opinions piece is that opinion pieces are supposed to be about the writer’s opinion while a hard news story is supposed to mainly be all fact. Another difference is that a hard news story has a lot of quotes, while opinion piece have little to no quotes. Another big difference is that a hard news story usually follows the LTQT style writing while an opinion piece does not.
B. I think that there aren’t very many photos on this page in order to not mislead the reader, that way the reader can form their own opinion based on the reading.
C. I think that sports, new trends, and school policies are three topics that would be good to write opinion pieces on.




News Evaluations

The Dispatch Review

Phase one: Parking lot complete:
Who: Workers, engineers, and managers
What: Construction
Where: Bowie Highschool
When: Everyday
Why: Future Bowie
How: Machines

Summary:Starting at the end of the 2018-2019 school year, Bowie has been in construction. A new parking garage is the overall project. Phase one of the project is done, which was to complete the surface parking lot, and now phase two is in action. During phase two, the parking garage will be built.

Quotes: Jack Whaley:Direct quote 
David Murphey:Direct quote
Emma Davis:Direct quote


Transition/statements that are opinions: no opinions

Headline: No. It only talks about phase one being complete, instead of about the start of phase two.

Photograph: Yes

State votes in over 800 laws following latest session:
Who: Governor Gregg Abbott
What: 820 bills turned into law.
Where: 86th legislative session
When: Spetember 1
Why: 1,000 bills were passed
How: With or without the Governor’s signature.

Summary: By the end of the 86th legislative session, 820 bills were signed into law. While some laws do not really affect many, many will have an impact. Many people like some laws, like the education bill while others are not so happy about laws on handguns or Bill 22.

Quotes: Dalton Pool: Direct
Abbas Akhtar: Direct
Makena Patterson: Direct



Transition/statements that are opinions: Many of the laws passed were of interest to students and staff here at Bowie. It is an opinion because there is nothing to back up the fact. You can only infer this.
In the age of digital media, sharing of media has become easier than ever. This is an opinion because many people believe the exact opposite.

Headline:Yes. It gets the main point clearly across.

Photograph: Yes

The stewing storm of sweet smoke:
Who:Teenagers
What: tobacco and nicotine products.
Where:State of Texas
When: September first
Why: Commonplace in highschools.
How: Legal age is 21

Summary: The legal age in Texas to buy tobacco and nicotine products is now 21. Lately, many tests have concluded that e-cigarettes are not a safe alternative to smoking. Because e-cigarettes are popular with students, many are helping this law will prevent smoking and vaping with students.

Quotes: Ben Satler: Direct
Jessica Davis: Direct
David Ronald: Direct
Mark Robinson: Direct

Transition/statements that are opinions: It can be difficult to control e-cigarette use in the bathroom. This is an opinion because there is no proof to back this up and another person could easily disagree.

Headline: Yes. It tells the main idea that e-cigarettes are causing problems.

Photograph: Yes

New policy provides teachers with silence during lunch:
Who: The administration
What: Eating lunch
Where:Academic halls
When: Beginning of the school year
Why: Silence and emptiness
How: announcing

Summary: Starting this year, a new policy prohibits students from eating in the academic hallways. Many teachers love this new policy because they now don’t have to worry about noisy students who leave messes behind. However, many students are not fond of this policy as they see it as taking away much of their lunch spaces.

Quotes: Mark Robinson: Direct
Stephanie Mcgraw: Direct
Ashley Spiro: Direct
Danny Burton: Direct
Brandy Ramos: Direct
Elissa Wechsler: Direct


Transition/statements that are opinions: As the new policy is enforced, teachers are thrilled to have the hallways be quieter…. This is an opinion because some teachers may not be so happy.
Students didn’t notice how much of a mess they would leave….. This is an opinion because there is no proof to back this up and I bet that most students did know.

Headline:Yes. That is because it informs the reader that teachers like the new lunch policy and and that lunch is now much quieter.

Photograph:Yes

New class offering Ethnic Studies:
Who: Carlen Floyd
What: Ethnic Studies class
Where: Bowie
When: This year
Why:Encourage active discussion
How: Elective

Summary: Starting this year, Ethnic Studies is a new class that Bowie students can take as an elective. The class allows students to freely talk about religion, social, economic, and beliefs with one another without being bullied or made fun of. This class is seen as a way for students to better relate to one another and understand each other's cultural background.

Quotes: Carlen Floyd: Direct
Liam Kornacki: Direct
Mariana Ramirez: Direct
Anamarie Jarmon-Booker: Direct


Transition/statements that are opinions: There were no opinions.

Headline: No. The headline mentions that Ethnic Studies is a new class, but it doesn’t further explain what they do in the class.

Photograph: Yes

First FFA grooming day this year:
Who: Senior veterinary medicine practicum students.
What: Future Farmers of America grooming day.
Where: Under the supervision of teacher Amber Dickinson
When:Today
Why:Offering pet care options
How: Drop of their dog

Summary: The first FFA grooming day of this year was last week. Teacher can drop of dogs and have many different pet care options done. This day gives FFA students real life scenarios when dealing with pets.

Quotes: Amber Dickinson: Direct


Transition/statements that are opinions: No opinions

Headline: Yes. That is because it says that it is the first FFA grooming day this year, and I think that that does a pretty good job in describing what the story is about.

Photograph: There is no art, graphic, or photo.

New student news source map:
Who: The Dispatch
What: The Student News Source
Where: Online
When: Now
Why: Easy to use 
How: On an app

Summary: There is now a new way for Bowie students to read the Dispatch. That is through the Student News Source app. With this app, students can now quickly see what's going on around campus and the community.

Quotes: Kaitlyn Zellner: Direct

Transition/statements that are opinions: There were no opinions

Headline: Yes. That is because it is short, concise, and still explains that there is a new news source online.

Photograph: There is no art, graphic, or photo.

Tuesday, October 1, 2019

Media Literacy

1. CBS NEWS, TIME, and USA TODAY.
2. Daily Beast, Mic, and Vanity Fair.
3. Reason.com, the weekly Standard, and National Review.
4. 2 extreme liberal: Palmer Report and patribotics. 2 extreme conservative: INFOWARS and Newsmax.

5. Fact: A statement that has evidence to prove it to be true.
6. Opinions: A statement that is based on judgement.
7. Informed Opinions: A statement that is based on judgement by a person who contains knowledge in the area.

8. When writing for The Dispatch, you may find facts from a credible source or interview.
9. A student or adult specified in the area of your story is who might provide informed opinions on a specific story you may write.
10. Opinions may creep into your writing when you use first person, like "our" or "I".
11. "I think" or "I believe" are words that could cue you in that you are writing an opinion when you self edit.

12. Amendment 1 is the amendment that specifies the rights of the press.
13. Amendment 1 directly says that Congress shall make no law respecting respecting an establishment of a religion, or prohibiting the free exercise hereof; or abridging the freedom of speech, or of the press, or the right of the people peaceably to assemble, and petition the government for a redress of grievances.

14. I believe that the purpose of the media/journalism in today's world is to give citizens information, that the citizen can then create opinions off of and make choices based on them.

15. One of the things that I noticed about the three article's headlines was that none of them said the same thing.
16. I do think that the bias of certain media outlets is evident in the three stories. That is because each story had their own point of view on Trump's presidency, and all three headlines were saying something different.
17. I think that Fox News and Brietbart chose to cover other things on the front of their websites that way they would not be criticizes if the news was wrong, especially because at that point, the news was very recent.
18. I do not believe that all media should treat coverage the same. That is because if we did, citizens would have no opinions, and something could easily be covered up and kept secret.
19. I do believe that it is okay if for some media outlets to be slanted towards one side or another as long as the reader knows this. That is because in order for people to have opinions, they must hear different sides of the story.
20. Yes, there is a reason to click on media sources that do not report the news the way you want. That is because you can compare the news you do like to the one you don't like. Also, you can atleast listen to another opinion in the story.

21. I think that the media can accurately report on what is happening in the world by using more facts and less opinions or informed opinions.

Final Exam

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